But will those paragraphs persuade someone to part with their money in
terms of your product or service? Will they
stand out in a world filled with messages of every description?
Unfortunately,
too many companies write as if they’re addressing a large audience from a
microphone up on stage - indeed that’s why a large amount of commercial,
academic and corporate words
- go
unread
- and
if read - will not be understood
- and if understood - will be ignored
This is
because that kind of writing simply doesn’t move us. What many people forget is that we hear a sort of
“subvocal” speech in our minds when we read. And the better that “speech” is created,
the more we become immersed in the words - and the more we are persuaded.
So this is the time to put your old English teacher
to one side of your mind and to write like you chat!
Firstly harmonise your copywriting with your reader
so that it sounds personal. As a rule of
thumb you should be using four "you's" to every "I". And
you should be writing "you" i.e.
NOT "We help
companies" or "We help people" but "We help you..."
Part of this chatty-sounding process is to achieve
a tone of informality, so use contractions like
·
isn’t - instead of
is not
·
and won’t -instead
of will not.
Writing which doesn’t resemble this rhythm of human
speech simply will not work. And talking of rhythm, that is the other secret ingredient of good copywriting - in
fact professionals compare writing copy to composing Jazz.
Creating this rhythm can be helped by mixing sentence
lengths for variety; by repetition of key words; and by using what’s called “triads”
i.e. a list of three words in a series with the last item preceded by the word “and”
e.g. “expert, experienced
and dynamic”
Only last week a client said to me – “we have had much more targeted
enquiries since you wrote our website copy”.
That’s because it wasn’t just words - it was salesmanship in print.
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